PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by H03nn89 » 11 Jun 2019, 18:22

Nice I like it!

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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by PharaohAtem » 11 Jun 2019, 19:16

Thanks, the only thing I don't like is the avatar something's off about it just not sure.
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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by H03nn89 » 11 Jun 2019, 20:58

Looks good to me

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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by PharaohAtem » 18 Jun 2019, 00:03

Thank you I've learned a lot from others on this site.
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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by lolin » 18 Jun 2019, 01:51

I like the ninja. You art'd the pants off her *ba dum tssh*

Anyways, the background looks good, but I almost wonder if it's too subtle. If you're going for a stealthy theme with the ninja then it's perfect, but maybe shrink the sig or add more stuff? IDK, but the left side just feels a little barren to me.
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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by Expendable » 18 Jun 2019, 03:04

It's a very nice piece, but ninjas are not supposed to be noticeable. This one you can't help to notice! Looks like a modified sailor fuku, which would be right without all the hardware for a ninja.

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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by PharaohAtem » 18 Jun 2019, 15:17

The render said ninja it's more celebration then hidden

I'll have to do another version
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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by H03nn89 » 21 Jun 2019, 18:24

Ninjas ninjas everywhere

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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by Sirena » 22 Jun 2019, 06:55

The Ninja set is nice.

I do agree that the ninja needs to be hidden.They are known for it but overall it is a nice edit.
I also agree that the avatar feels like it is missing something but I can't put my finger on what though.I may have to think on it in order to give you some ideas :)
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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by PharaohAtem » 22 Jun 2019, 15:17

Sirena wrote:The Ninja set is nice.

I do agree that the ninja needs to be hidden.They are known for it but overall it is a nice edit.
I also agree that the avatar feels like it is missing something but I can't put my finger on what though.I may have to think on it in order to give you some ideas :)

I'll hide the ninja.

See I knew something was missing but I couldn't figure it out either.
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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by GraceMellody » 27 Jun 2019, 20:30

Who knew ninjas could be so cute?
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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by Creophagous » 28 Jun 2019, 06:27

PharaohAtem wrote:So I made this one I'm thinking it's missing something maybe some dark trees in the back or something or maybe some flying sand of some sort. There are multiple versions I'm working one with a boarder and one without a boarder and depends on the colors of the boarders as well. I was thinking of putting cracks in the tombstones maybe.


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Now this I actually like. Very interesting and reminds me of the anime I am watching- probably is from the same series: Ajin. Well it's on Netflix and I haven't seen the end yet as I have been busy with other things, but absolutely brilliant. :)
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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by H03nn89 » 28 Jun 2019, 18:07

Oh...

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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by Sirena » 29 Jun 2019, 03:26

*lurks*

I can't wait to see the next set that you create.
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Re: PharaohAtem's Warehouse of Art

Post by Expendable » 02 Jul 2019, 02:19

Don't step on any ninjas!

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