So This Stuff I Mention Writing But Never Post
Posted: 12 Nov 2020, 17:22
Long talked about it. May as well show my writing. It's been a while. My main influence is I write the things I'd like to see in Poetry.
Only just learned the modern way of no space breaks. If you write keep doing it. I started in 1994 intended to be a Romantic Poet.
Hi hi ha that side's dead these days!
It's mainly the Open Floors on the Wirral and Liverpool I read at. Did film a few, but can't promise audio.
Best way to start is the current. This was the last thing written last Sunday. Trouble with the police flared up on this old housing estate.
I was round the corner oblivious. I normally write and finish them as fast as I have the idea.
This one took two days. I'll take pictures of how it looks written, as there's order numbers written alongside with the lines crossed out rejected.
Long preamble, yes, they'll get shorter, but naturally this is not representative of the stuff I've written before.
I have a friend settled in the country originally from Bangladesh and I have had two small run books that he at least paid for.
I know, look into getting published elsewhere and with bigger reach!
Imagine this thread by Christmas?
Happy reading!
All stuff posted copyright author of thread.
DOORSTEP AND JUST FIRST WEEKEND
They used to joke of making stool
In emergency Police helmet if caught short
The humiliation now other tables
But handheld completes the full statement
Restraint the knee on neck
Not learnt a thing
Intent to save from death by youths own hand
Their rescue crew against uniform wall
Picked off by re-enforcements and controlled
The spraying which linked to a planet
How they joked and must have diminished
Months ago how they should be complicit
By staying out from it
This causes last to see pictured
If you know the roads
What magick bought cars to incident?
"Bareback passenger target delivery
Jump on ride off a plot of villainy."
Everyone meet agree on Sunday
Who in the wrong but response
Bigger controversy
The confusion hard locked now again shut
Brief of wheel a helmet that looks blooded
Pounding skywards rotating specialist blades
Surrounding diamonds protesting the arresting pains
For clues I don't know why
They did it
Without pointing random obvious limits
Back onside now a task Herculean
More or less on doorstep
And it was only the first of the weekend
No guns but still a window into
An ethos regimented unbeknownst full truth
By staying out it's cast if not troupe
No idea what happened consequences
Or how it passed and cooled
It's quiet now but there's no sleeping
Off Duty see them at Bus Stops
In Unit controlling the angry knocked
Scared and inflamed represented betrayed
To answer question "What is going on?"
Consolation for the victim
Brings forward a world
In which this doesn't happen
Resilience no excuses for answers
What generation understands they were
Only pawns and the game was really named
"Testing Ground"?
Step back further just abandoned contestants
Left to survive on hospitality suppressants.
Only just learned the modern way of no space breaks. If you write keep doing it. I started in 1994 intended to be a Romantic Poet.
Hi hi ha that side's dead these days!
It's mainly the Open Floors on the Wirral and Liverpool I read at. Did film a few, but can't promise audio.
Best way to start is the current. This was the last thing written last Sunday. Trouble with the police flared up on this old housing estate.
I was round the corner oblivious. I normally write and finish them as fast as I have the idea.
This one took two days. I'll take pictures of how it looks written, as there's order numbers written alongside with the lines crossed out rejected.
Long preamble, yes, they'll get shorter, but naturally this is not representative of the stuff I've written before.
I have a friend settled in the country originally from Bangladesh and I have had two small run books that he at least paid for.
I know, look into getting published elsewhere and with bigger reach!
Imagine this thread by Christmas?
Happy reading!
All stuff posted copyright author of thread.
DOORSTEP AND JUST FIRST WEEKEND
They used to joke of making stool
In emergency Police helmet if caught short
The humiliation now other tables
But handheld completes the full statement
Restraint the knee on neck
Not learnt a thing
Intent to save from death by youths own hand
Their rescue crew against uniform wall
Picked off by re-enforcements and controlled
The spraying which linked to a planet
How they joked and must have diminished
Months ago how they should be complicit
By staying out from it
This causes last to see pictured
If you know the roads
What magick bought cars to incident?
"Bareback passenger target delivery
Jump on ride off a plot of villainy."
Everyone meet agree on Sunday
Who in the wrong but response
Bigger controversy
The confusion hard locked now again shut
Brief of wheel a helmet that looks blooded
Pounding skywards rotating specialist blades
Surrounding diamonds protesting the arresting pains
For clues I don't know why
They did it
Without pointing random obvious limits
Back onside now a task Herculean
More or less on doorstep
And it was only the first of the weekend
No guns but still a window into
An ethos regimented unbeknownst full truth
By staying out it's cast if not troupe
No idea what happened consequences
Or how it passed and cooled
It's quiet now but there's no sleeping
Off Duty see them at Bus Stops
In Unit controlling the angry knocked
Scared and inflamed represented betrayed
To answer question "What is going on?"
Consolation for the victim
Brings forward a world
In which this doesn't happen
Resilience no excuses for answers
What generation understands they were
Only pawns and the game was really named
"Testing Ground"?
Step back further just abandoned contestants
Left to survive on hospitality suppressants.