Don't sell yourself short! I think your a brilliant artist also. It can be said just looking through each page and seeing all the wonderful works. You're newest piece examplifies innocence so touchingly. A baby angel hugging a stuffed bunny... how adorable! And rather well illustrated too down to th...

Wow the old sigs are nice but even as I look at your recent work it's clear how much you've improved. The Jing image is my favorite out of the bunch. Everything about it seems so well composed. A shadowy figure surrounded by floating cards. Such a mysterious feel~ The text was impecably chosen I bel...

Wow! Why have I not noticed this thread before? Such neat 3D artwork, Krayne. I can tell you are very skilled at it. Those models are quite impressive! Zen mentioned the gleams on the latest one, and that was something I'd immediately noticed, myself. Great attention to detail, especially with all t...

Nice to see you posting in here again, Expendable. I liked both stories. They were certainly unique. Sorry to hear you've been depressed, however. Personally, I've found that it further motivates my writing. Anywho, they were quite a laugh. Nice use of dialogue. The ex cons talked like straight up s...

Kay.

1. You *Deserve* A Chance To Fly
2. The *simple* hiss of a *wisp*
3. A *little* note of hope
4. In the ear, to *relieve* fear

Had http://vimeo.com/19733014 running threw my head. Lead me to writing this. You deserves a chance to fly ~ The smple hiss of a whisp. Ever so sweet of a feat. A litle note of hope. In the ear, to aleave fear. Kiss of cheek,heart skips a beat. Finger wrapped around, happily bound. Would grovel in ...

Everyone has their own methods, it seems.

Well, what I mean is, I didn't force them. I just thought of them and they happened. Usually, I have to scout out words to rhyme with or research different subjects or look up words to get things to fit. Those poems were more a product of feeling rather than a usual writing project.

It isn't a good sign when the author is unsure of why or what has been written. Actually this has happened to me before with really good feedback. My PoM #8 piece and 'Someone Else'. They kind of just came to me. I didn't know wtf I was doing but it turned out alright lol... The 4th stanza is weird...

Hmm. Give me a chance to ponder this. I will come back.

Yeah line 9 is the only thing I have a problem with. It could be so much better with something else to go there. This is just my opinion, however.

Technically, it's whatever you want, since it's your poem. That is the beauty of writing. If you like it and are happy with the way it is, then this is most important.

I like it all except line 9. It doesn't fit the sea/droplet theme very well.

Well it worked cuz it was totally awesome. Made me very happy, actually! Whatever you plan on doing with that trash pile, just mention me and I'll come see what's been cooked up from it.

I was surprised at the outcome. It seemed like we weren't getting anywhere... but despite butting heads, I was happy with our entry.

Also... how do you forget that a poem is yours? D: