Definitely. It's better to be able to cast a fresh eye over a piece after you've left it a while, rather than niggle away at it continuously (a habit I'm still trying to ditch ).

A quick little note first off - be sure to say in your introductions what sort of critique you would like to receive from people. This can be particularly important where you've written something close to your heart and don't want to see it torn apart. As you haven't stated it for this piece, I've j...