I've posted a thread in the Writing board including a little bit from one of the chapters I'm writing, if you wanted to take a look. I'm fishing for discussion on dialogue pacing.
Hello! I promise to be gentle. You just tell me what you want me to focus on and I'll follow your instructions.
Hiya! I'm happy you offered to beta-read my stuff. I'd only ask that you'd be gentle in criticism at first. I'm kind of sensitive, and I don't want to trash my whole story all at once! Lol
But sure, I'll let you know when I'm ready for people to take a gander at it.