Keisadiya's Radical(lol) Portfolio - yay! [A/C/W]

[Mata]

I will, I will

Loving it so far though

[Panty Commander]

awesome dude.


Well might as well post a page i did for a DIFFERENT comic lol
Co-created by me and my EX lol yay for civil exes xD
We co-plot, and she writes, of course i do everything else!

http://rtcomic.andehtiemz.com/2011/0...an-adventurer/

[Capousky]

Another amazing page. I see very small flaws with proportions and anatomy, particularly with the shoulders, too square perhaps (I say that cause I have the same problem). The shading in this one is pretty well done, the light source is very constant and accurate.

Outstanding work, keep at it

[Panty Commander]

Thanks alot. and yeah I have some issues. I blame DBZ. when i started drawing muscles back in HS that wa smy main inspiration haha its a shame he drew so boxy, im still trying to get that out of my muscular art haha

[Capousky]

I have exactly the same problem, that is really interesting Damn you, Akira Toriyama!!!

[Panty Commander]

haha xD how funny it is that he'a cursed soo many artists haha

[Capousky]

He and his stupid sense of anatomy and proportions

[Panty Commander]

hahah i know xD

[Panty Commander]

U'm dont kill me for a dblpost buit i wanted to up some logos I've done.

[Capousky]

Well, I am not an expert in GFXing but this banners look really good, I love the colors you choose for them, particularly the third one. Perhaps the second one is a bit difficult to read because of the combination of colors, particularly the word in the top.

Nice, nice work

[Mata]

Cool new page PC I never liked Dragonball so whatever my faults, I didn't pick them up from Akira wotsit

Nice logos too Like Cappy I'm no expert with logos, but I agree about the second one. I think the way you coloured "Uptown" breaks it up a little too much and so makes it harder to read.

Other than that, great stuff

[Panty Commander]

yeah i agree, but that band insisted on those looks LOL psychobilly bands. what can you do? hahah

[Anni]

Jeez i'm late.
Anyway, i do agree with most Mata nad Cappy say so far.
I want to welcome the first artist that draw sequential art, instead of just illustration!
I really like your style, is really particular, and shows a complete knowledge of the drawings basis. You have a really original and incisive way of colouring, and your toning is really good, i have to say more american than japanese style.
I can also see you know how to flow a story, or just a single strip.
In this one in particular http://rtcomic.andehtiemz.com/2011/0...an-adventurer/ in the second frame the girl is yawning (anticipation) but you still laugh when you saw her sleeping at the end! great .
Other than that i like your logo, especially the first one, the others looks a bit too much........
love your work, look forward it!

[Panty Commander]

Thanks a lot anni! I'm glad you like it! and yeah my influences are really a mix or american and japanese. i just try to do my own thing, you know?

[Anni]

and you do it great, you know?