That is super adorable!
The grey on the far side threw me off a little bit. For me it throws the balance off I might have used another shade of orange (like how in the opposite corner is a lighter shade of orange). Just an opinion of course. I really like the Avi and the way her hands frame her face. It's super cute.
Reviewing Haruhi huh? Well that should be fun. Here I go.
I love haruhi but this image is too sharp. The blue glow around the object in the lower right just seems like its been sharpened too much, as does the render. I like the background and there is even a border which placates me somewhat, but the image just looks like it went through hyper sharpening or something. The text is fine and I have no other issues with the work save for one thing. Her fingers. The point in two different directions and I want to go in both directions. That is fine, nothing wrong there, except there is nothing there. both fingers point to the border which makes me metaphorically bash my head on it. That just seems weird to me. The sig and avi do go together though, and they do match so kudous to that ^^. I suck at making matching avis and sigs. Anyways nice piece, just seems like it needs work in a few places
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great colors! They're so dynamic, and I love how they're different from what Haruhi usually gets (blues and whites).
Did you smudge it to get that sharp line effect? I actually rather like it. Have you tried out any of the brushes I gave you yet?
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You wish, nerd.
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don't forget to tell Zen your safe-word. totally spoils the mood when someone's screaming "blueberry pancakes!" mid-flogging and you've no idea why.
Actually the awkward orangy bit around her is my attempt at using the brushes! and thanks a lot I knew this one was a good one
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Oh neat! Which ones did you use? Florals would be perfect for this.
Oh i think I used the splashy ones but ill try it with the florals and see if it comes out better or ill make a new one tonight with the florals
I'm excited to see it. :3
Made this for my main page it's just basic
You picked the right image for it. ^-^
Very sweet and simple and good for the main page.
Love it! Great text. =]
The text is nice. Giving it the drop shadow and blurring the background really makes it pop out of the image.
made these two as a set pair
and I want some criticism on this one and i need to find a nice font to go with it but i have no ideas :/ I want this to be my best one yet :3
I really like the text on the top ones. Very nicely done.
For the third one, I like how you made the splatters follow the shape of her body. It's a little simple right now, but I think the addition of text will help with that.
The problem is I can't quite find a good font for it because as you can see i'm using the same font over and over
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