Rony Heat's Drawings,feedback please

[Mata]

Nice work Rony The first two are really nice character sketches and you get a good feel for his personality. The last is very atmospheric. One thing I notice with the last one is that the upper arm (the character's right) looks a little bit stuck on afterwards. If you erased some of the lines at the bottom of the shoulder where it joins the chest it would look more a part of the body.

Nice work

[Anni]

Hello,
i like like these three sketch,
i agree with Cappy about the hand in the first one, aside that (hands are damn difficult, so just keep practice even just observing your own), the character is really good, is really expressive, and the characteristic suit each others, i mean he has the right look for the right hair and the right clotes and so on.
About clothes you did the folders really well and according to the movement.
the second pics has a really nice pose, the face looks more beautiful and really well proportioned.
about the third i like the pose most, pluse the face is really expressive.
good work, keep at it!

[Rony Heat]

Thanks for the feed back, to be honest most of my pictures aren't close ups like the first one usually. I mean its a simply perspective but was still weird for me.

So i haven't really made anything of late but just a simple chalk doodle. feedback would be nice, buts its just for kicks.

http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w...t/89f9c1f7.jpg

[Capousky]

He, he. I like this one too Is very funny but even so, very well done for a quick doodle

[Anni]

I like it very much! the expression of his face is great and by looking at your fast line i can see you are really skilled!
it can be an interesting character!

[Rony Heat]

Huh fast line?

[Anni]

Sorry
I mean when you draw lines in a fast way, like under an impulse, withouth thinking too much..........just that, hope is clear!

[Rony Heat]

oh~ so that's what you mean Anni =) I'll keep trying my best.

So yeah its been sometime since i even drawing anything. I have tried constant elaborate drawings but my skill level isn't there yet sadly. Hopefully it will someday, no rush you know

Though till then I made these two pics so critc please feedback ^^

http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w...oweenparty.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w...pireHunter.jpg

[Mata]

Those are both good pics Rony :

The first really captures the Halloween party atmosphere well and the cartoony style really suits it. It looks really happy and joyous. The characters are really sweet - I especially love the little ghost with his big smile. I think the pumpkin on the right looks a little rushed or unfinished compared to the other one but it's a minor issue which is easily sorted either in pencil or if you choose to ink it

The sceond one is nice too. The character has a distinctive look but I think it might have been better if you'd used a ruler to draw his gun. It's a neat design, but if you notce the bit that sticks out behind him is at a different angle to the rest of it. The background is a little perfunctory, but as this is a character sketch it's not really important. i like the little moon and cloud detail in the corner though

Great stuff and keep at it

[Dezi]

these are the ones you posted for the souls of shadow event =D
I still really like the first one :3 really cute and funny. the ghost is my favourite one <3

as Mata said the weapon was a little uneven. but that's all I noticed myself >.>
It's a really epic drawing! :3

[Rony Heat]

Thanks for the compliments and feedback =D

Anyways its been a real long while since ive drawn anything worth putting here but I recently drew new art stuff with my free time.

So yeah not much to say outside of Feedback please~

http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w...rsonaRonys.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w...ionTribute.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w...tsofmexico.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w...urehall177.jpg

[OAS]

you are showing much progress!
....wow i sounded like a jedi there haha

anyway keep it up and all that jazz

[Anni]

Hey there Rony!!

I was away for a while and lost track of you all, i'm sorry.........

I have to say you improved a lot lately, i like your latest work
The first one has some interesting expressions and really good foreshortening effects!

the second one is amazing, i really like the clean lines and the composition itself, the guy that face the robot is a great idea and a really nice composition!

the third one, is really good, perspective is well done and i like how you draw the two characters, it lack perhaps of details, but meh, perspective is a great achievement, well done!

the last one is epic! it makes me laugh a lot, i love the composition as whole, is the oddest class i ever seen, great pose and expression for the guy that is teasing the robot!!

You improved a lot, really, i hope to see more from you!

[KimShibbyBob]

Thanks for the feed back, to be honest most of my pictures aren't close ups like the first one usually. I mean its a simply perspective but was still weird for me.

So i haven't really made anything of late but just a simple chalk doodle. feedback would be nice, buts its just for kicks.

http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w...t/89f9c1f7.jpg

I like this one, the big cheesey grin made me grin