I agree about the brightness on the 2nd and third, my monitor is pretty dark but they seem a bit bright to me ^^ Be careful as it can take away from the details of the piece. For the text, moving it closer to the focal point and perhaps some subtext would really work!
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Wow thank you very much for the feedback Text placement is something I've never really put much thought into before so thanks for the tips!
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another clannad sig tried to not do my usual stlye and just played around with colour levels and Layers
Need quite an improvement, best one is the 6th one, but still... Follow some tuts try blurring and using curves, to get better contrast on those siggys. Even thougt they are not bad
I really like the colors in that new one, and your text is getting better! Did you use a stock background for that? If so, you made a great choice.
Originally Posted by Expendable don't forget to tell Zen your safe-word. totally spoils the mood when someone's screaming "blueberry pancakes!" mid-flogging and you've no idea why. Originally Posted by Zen Originally Posted by Stiletto Kitty Dragon. Dear. This is the prettiest section on AL. It's also the least sober, probably most intoxicated, and if it were a real place there would be two rivers of Vodka running through it. Literally the most accurate post ever made about GFA.
Actually no I didn't I just used this stock from the VN
I like how you did the colors though, it looks like a cold winters day :3
Why thank you, that was the look I was going for =)
So I've been playing Little Busters a lot lately I deiced against my initial stock idea due to: 1. seeing it makes me cry (it's from the emotional climax of possibly the saddest VN route I've ever played) 2. it's spoilerific, and I hate making sets that are massive spoilers. so I made this piece instead I wasn't 100% about it but I added some text too
I like your text choice, but I think it's too big for the stock. Text should be proportionate to the figures in your sig. Overall, though, it looks very nice.
Thanks, I wasn't 100% about it, hence why I'm now using it without text
I agree with Zen, the text takes up too much of the sig. Also try cropping it to show more of her :]
so seeing as I can't post my first piece from the olympics yet (I'm not happy with it but I'll rant when I can say which one is mine) I'll post my latest sig instead
I'm not feeling the halftone here, maybe just adjust the lighting?
I actually don't mind the halftone, but you need to add more to the sig. It's pretty plain right now, and the stock hasn't changed much.
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