Type: Posts; User: §hadow
Oh okay. I guess I hadn't picked up on that. Very interesting. I'll read it again soon so I can connect the new information you have provided to get that perspective cleared up. :)
I like that...
Hey, once a month is better than not at all Lilblossomcub
How are you and your family holding up? I'd offer you a ride but we are on opposite ends of town. XP
I wouldn't say I'm back. You guys are just lucky for my visit. ;)
But you are welcome and I thank you for the warm welcome. :)
Well I didn't want to delve into the "sexual" content. But that makes sense... but I still don't get why "no please no" ends it. Why not in the beginning or the middle? Why the end?
I've actually worked on this while I was absent from AL. Chances are the quickest update will go to WattPad first. (Linked above in another post). At least... I'll only be posting one of...
Now I know where Bear got it. How dare you steal his creativity. <_<;
Loved reading all of those Regal Beagle :3
Sorry it took a few months to return to this (AL and your work).
So... I've read this particular piece multiple times and I chose not to look at anyone else's comments yet. I'm...
I have something for you. Just thought I'd tell you before I forget again. XD
Which Meet did you attend Ben Simpson? And welcome to AL :)
Have any hobbies or interests? Did you cosplay at the meet? :)
How many volumes was your week reading feat? :)
Maybe one of these days we may roleplay with one another. In CityScape of course.
At least we know you are alive. :P
Pretty much.... xD
Lilblossomcub you haven't missed enough to worry about what you've missed. :) We are just happy you are back. =)
What have you been up to?
XD Seeing some great riddles. ;___;
Derp moment, you also said no doors. XD
I've heard this one in my life time, but for the life of me, I always forget it.
For fun, is it A Roommate? XD
A storage room? XD
Well, what is a monster to you, and what hand you meant for "him" to be?
It's not so much of whether or not it feels better, but rather what you hoped to do for your reader and...
I'm not usually all on technical bits when it comes to poetry because there really isn't a defined -wrong- way, just the standard way because of pattern of history, the start of a favored style or in...
Ioreth got it! :D Yay, he stole a Base. :)
=3 Indeed. >) Now for all the fun to begin.
Welcome to AnimeLeague!
This place is just so great and filled with so much you get absorbed with awesomeness. :) Since you like to cosplay and such I really recommend you try out...
I just finished Dollar Bar. I noticed in there that there were spacing mistakes, possibly unintentional when pasting into AL form a word document program. With this story, I was...
Maybe I misunderstood you?
You said there was a Leeroy Award (not verbatim) I thought for massacring your team/group or a group. XD
Thanks guys. :)
Will do AGJ glad to see you purple and active yourself. ;P
That's alright, I think I see where you are going with it.
A matter of perspective. :)
I get that the message is, to me, simply meaning that children should know sportsmanship and learn it...
Massacred them... ensured their death through initial suicide... same dif. xD
SO this award practice is for lulls?
Maybe not so much add on as improve or expand upon what is already there. It ends like more could be given in a future day, but as it stands, as is... is where I'll touch upon below:
Heya Kilidath, been a while.
It would be really cool if you could put each piece into spoilers since you put multiple poems in one post. That aside, I decided, so far to critique Monster for now....
There was a guy who wanted to steal and everyone watched but did nothing about it. Some encouraged the guy but some didn't. "Yes go for it" they'd say, "No don't" others would advise....
I really enjoyed this piece for many reasons. Never seen someone do what you did, with a word and a meaning presented, as the start of a poem on the first line. In a unique way,...
Oh. I thought he massacre'd his teammates in that video... LOL
Do you have any intentions or plans to revise this little piece of writing from your stack of hidden works GosaiNekojin ?
I ask because although I feel like it makes for a great story, with all...
An achievement how?
How did you not know that about me, any of it!? :D=: For shame. V_V
LOL Studies are okay, got a backwards poem effect with my grades this last semester. XD
Been doing alright, lots of stuff...
I think, Naruto0256 that as a poem writer myself, that giving you feedback is both beneficial and a set back.
While I feel that for this piece by you is respectable and thought out, my writer side...
"He is Just a Little Boy" by Chaplain Bob Fox
I decided to google the "title" as "He's just a little boy poem" in the google search because I...
I agree with VaanDiablo and probably can't provide such a historical response, but one thing that I really had to repeat because I thought it was a valuable statement was the fact that those...
Thanks and your welcome.
Not what I was expecting, since I over looked your tag by accident. xD
Based off a real event. xD
Wow. Does he do it a lot and on purpose? o-o (Sorry don't follow WoW).
Mew. Who is Leeory? (Not as Cyddlu but the origin of the word/name).
Clever, witty and pleasing to read.
It was a great first pick read on my part I'd say. Well done Reagle :)
No kidding. xD Well that's okay, found them all homes luckily in a timely manner. I miss some of them (all of them). XD Happy belated birthday. XD
Totally forgot that ^ D=
And posting in...
And then there were....
After multiple, unexpected, events have occurred, I have managed to gauge a wavered return date with an error of 3 days margin and return in fair expected time.
Anyways, I'm back to AL. This...
I can help if need be.
>>; Laugher you?